Our peers went round in groups to watch our videos and then leave comments on the following questions. This was the feedback that we had from the other members of the class:
1. What would you rate as strengths of the music video?
Effects of the music video are good, for example the speeding up of the town scenes. Also the concept of the idea fitted well with the theme of the song.
2. what do you think are the areas for improvement?
The editing needs to be more faster. There should also be more scene variety, it was also noted that there was un-professional giggling and smiling from singer and background extras. There is also the possibility for more performing.
3. what do you think the group should change?
There should be more shot types to improve the video. There was also a comment about the lighting of our video on how it almost instantly goes from light to dark, this was not intended. We where also advised to keep the length of the videos same as lyrics.
4. what has the group still got to do?
We should use more footage and locations and complete the end of the video as it was an unfinished copy of the rough cut and ends abruptly.
We have taken into consideration the comments and ideas given from the other groups and are likely to incorporate these ideas into our final cut.
No response to “roughcut peer feedback”
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